Hopefully the main idea

It is only me and Suzanna today as Maddy is ill. We have brainstormed again and thought about possibly a roof idea. A girl on a roof, just standing there, about to walk off. Then a man slams through a door on the roof and shouts "wait!", this causes the girl  to stop, and turn around and the two people have a small conversation, of which the subject of the conversation maybe a mystery to the audience. Then the man walks forward slowly when talking to her, she then turns and jumps, the man then runs trying to save her, and starts shouting. The sound effects include a sound of a gun going off, to create suspense, and representing that a life may be lost... this is then confirmed by a screaming voice, which dramatises this. Whilst this is happening, the time slows down, creating slow motionm, so when the girl finally hits the floor suddenly, the motion of the clip also fastens up to a natural speed. Then there is a camera shot is going to cut to the womans hand as she lie on the floor, with a trickle of blood. The camera  then looks up at him and then cuts to a close up of his face looking down muttering the words no. Then cuts to a black screen with the words ,36 hours ealier.